jigging at 280 feet
on the far waters
the surface a slapping confused chop
inky boat-swirling eddies
in the calm
lines straight down
*Copyright 2010 by Luther Allen. This poem appears in The View from Lummi Island.
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I like the way you capture a moment…some poetry is overly cluttered, but yours feels balanced. Good to see you at Phrasings.